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August 27, 2014, 12:28:32 AM
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I like it.
"Spirit is in a state of grace forever.
Your reality is only spirit.
Therefore you are in a state of grace forever."

"As relfections of the Source, we are little gods."

"...part of me doesn't want to believe that auto-eroticism while crushing on a doodle (sigil) could manifest a check in the mail box, but hey, it did."

"Everybody laughs the same language."

August 27, 2014, 05:08:39 AM
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The measure of a poet, and a poem, rests primarily in the capacity to convey feeling and inspire some sort of movement in the reader. Whether the reader loves it, hates it, or simply finds it interesting, in all such cases you've captured the readers attention and moved them.

Technique and form are only secondary to this emotive aspect of poetry.

It's a good poem, Rayn.



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August 27, 2014, 09:37:17 AM
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The measure of a poet, and a poem, rests primarily in the capacity to convey feeling and inspire some sort of movement in the reader. Whether the reader loves it, hates it, or simply finds it interesting, in all such cases you've captured the readers attention and moved them.

Technique and form are only secondary to this emotive aspect of poetry.

It's a good poem, Rayn.
Well said.  In the end everyone interprets the poems however the hell they want to regardless of how the poet wanted the poem to be interpreted. There's always at least one to love poet's poems. Besides, one may notice that all famous poets have both well-liked and hated poems.

In your case Rayn, one could seriously mistaken you to a real poet. I like the poem, very much so.